Lugia (Help with text wanted)

[IDave the Rave]

Hi guys, I'm pretty new here, but anyway, I made a Lugia signature and I would like some CnC. Please, if you can't think of anything to say, please at least try to tell me what to do with the text.

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/9006/lugia9000.png

Originally the text was placedto the right hand side of Lugia, but after some CnC I was given on ForgeHub, most people preferred the text next to his chest. But I'm really not sure what I prefer.

Here's an old version with the original text:

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6263/lugia2.png

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Have you tried moving the text between the mouth and tip of the tail, and having the text in one line?

[Bigstack]

Is that a Pokemon?

[IDave the Rave]

Have you tried moving the text between the mouth and tip of the tail, and having the text in one line?

I've tried having the text on one line, but personally I think it looks too long on one line.
I shall try moving the text between the tail and the mouth later, because at the moment I need to prepare for my graphics exam this afternoon :O.


Is that a Pokemon?

Yes, it is a pokemon, but no, I don't play pokemon before you ask. :P

[Bigstack]

Ok thats what i though. I still have it :P

[IDave the Rave]

Ok thats what i though. I still have it :P

Lol, for some reason, recently I've felt desperate to buy a DS just so I can play Pokemon again, I'm not sure why though.

[Bigstack]

I miss my Gameboy Color I had one then packet it away somewhere and havent found it since/ Pokemon yellow FTW

[Tactics]

Ha! I still has my Gameboy Color :P